Who I am?
My name is Laila and I’m 18 years old, my
favorites animals are the tiger and the cats. My favorite color is the red. I
believe that anything could happen you only need discipline and effort.
Sometimes it is hard to believe who you are, so it is important to don´t forget
to stay true to yourself.
Every girl needs love and nobody is perfect
and that’s why I love my family, boyfriend and friends. I have 3 pets: two cats and one Alaska
malamute.
In my room I have like a treasure it
includes a dream catcher, lava lamp, two paintings and two little porcelain
angels.
I don´t like that some people don’t have
education neither respect.
In five words I am: ecological, dreamer and
positive.

Always that I do an activity like this I remind myself that the people change in this post I remember that i repeat a lot the words so I want to improve this.
ResponderBorrarNice to meet you Laila.
ResponderBorrarYou looked so cute :)
You can correct the mistakes with the option "edit entry"
These are the ones I found:
"favorites animals" (adjectives never plural)
"to don´t" (after TO you don't need auxiliary: TO NOT is the correct form)
You looked very cute!!
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